Sentence edit

Hi Rob,

I was reading through your wiki tonight and found a sentence that could be edited. The original sentence:

"The traditional opinion on the conduct of archivists was that archivists as professionals should be wholly impartial in the work that they do, merely acquiring and preserving records of importance an exercising no influence on the way the future remembers the past."

Perhaps this could be broken into two: "Traditional opinion on the conduct of archivists was that archivists, as professionals, should be wholly impartial in the work that they do. It was believed that archivists should merely acquire and preserve records of importance and exercise no influence on the way the future remembers the past."

Just a suggestion! Chelsea