Some comments

hi Christine, I added the time machine details after Adena's comment about not getting a sense of what their holdings were like, glad you liked it! Haven't been able to find out what proportion of government to private records are there; that information doesn't seem to be anywhere. I might try and call them to find out more. As well, there's no information on repatriation anywhere. Royal BC Museum has a brief policy, but it's from 2002, before BC Archives even fell under their umbrella. This is an area I think they could focus on and improve.

Sorry for being really late to reply to you again! I see you have added some more info to the holdings sections - hopefully you didn't have to do too much more work finding more information, but now it sounds really good. One super time grammar point I happened to notice: Under you Document Disposal Act, I think if you added a "was" before "designed for a paper-based recordkeeping system" in the first sentence it would read a bit better. Other than that your whole page still looks excellent!