Some suggestions

Some suggestions

Hi Mariko,

Your wiki is fascinating and very well researched. You also make good use of hyperlinks to direct the reader to related pages outside your wiki. I have a few suggestions. The first is that some of your quotations could be more integrated into the flow of your writing. Here are two I noticed:

“... the Stasi attacked and persecuted all internal opposition to communism, often displaying great cruelty and sadism.”[18] "Its retrieval and use became more standardized."[75]

There are also a couple of sentences that could use further clarification.

'The rescued archives were of various media (textual, photographs, negatives, slides, and sound and video recordings) which created preservation issues.' (Maybe in a footnote or in the body of the text, you could briefly explain what the preservation issues are).

'In addition, the Stasi archives included non-Stasi records stolen by the Stasi, creating more arrangement issues for archivists.[28]' (Same thing, I was wondering, what are the arrangement issues?)

The only other suggestion I have is perhaps to break up the section Archivist's role. It's a little long. But, it's not so long that it seems overwhelming.

Great work!

Cristen (talk)18:47, 6 April 2013

Hi Cristen,

Thanks for your suggestions. I've attempted now to make them a bit more streamlined and clearer. I agree with you on the Archivist's role section. I kept trying to break it up but I wasn't sure what was the best way to approach it. I've now added a subheading so we'll see how that goes.

Makazuta (talk)07:04, 7 April 2013