Organization

Hi Allison,

I think your organization looks good so far. I like the nesting of the case studies under the appropriate sections, I don't think it is necessary to put case studies in their own section. This way your case studies "illustrate" the discussion of the section above. I think the ICA points should be made subsections instead of being bulleted points, then each point can be easily navigated to as it will be delineated in the contents table. Also by making them subsections the points are given greater emphasis in the text.

Hannah

Hi Hannah, Thanks for the feedback! I will keep the case studies where they are. I also changed the ICA points to subsections and will see how I feel about that after leaving them that way for a while. The subsections just end up looking so short!

I know what you mean about short subsections, but I had a look just now and I think they look good, even though they are short. It is also great to see them in the contents. Because they are clearly distinct points that fit together under the ICA heading, I don't think they look incomplete or unsubstantial at all. Hannah