Comments

Allison -

I think yo have created a really great page here. You have provided a ton of great and insightful information and I have learned a lot from your page.

1)I don't have many large comments, just some nitpicky things here and there. My first suggestion might to bold some words and phrases. With pages that are so large and filled with so much information, it is sometimes nice to be able to scroll through the page and have some words that stand out to the reader drawing them to a section other than just the title. You have so much information that I think bolding some words such as person, places, or things, might help readers of the page stay focused or draw them to sections they may otherwise scroll over.

2) I really enjoyed your introduction. It is really well written and drew me into the subject of this page.

3) In the Section reason for reparations the sentence as Bastian has argued... I was immediately distracted at wondering who this was. maybe include a first name or some sort of introduction. I found myself reading the sentence twice because the first time I thought I had missed who this person was.

4) the Section Documents in a nations/ group's language really interested me and although small really caught my attention and it is not always something that is thought about.

5) The ICA section is really great. The flow and breakdown are easy to follow.

I don't have much on the way of changes but I really enjoyed your page and I learned a lot. I think you covered a lot of area but managed to provide a great amount of detail in an easy to understand writing.

Hi Morgan,

Bolding words to help with readability is a GREAT suggestion, thank you! I will definitely take the time to do that. I was trying to think of how to make it easier to read because it is kind of just a big hunk of text right now and really needs something to make it more navigable. I will also change the Bastian reference to make it less jarring. Thanks for this!