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Fragment of a discussion from Course talk:ARST573/Archives and Genocide
Thanks for the help! I cleaned up the section a bit. Those sentences have been fleshed out, with parts moved to other sections, but the remaining part is still at the top of the section. It could be moved though. If you have time, let me know what you think - No worries if not!
MarisaParker (talk)
That reads as a lot more concrete to me at least.
AmySpooner (talk)
Great, thanks!
MarisaParker (talk)