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Hi Rosie,

Thanks for the suggestions! I do have more to add to the introduction but I usually finish that last. I was wondering about a conclusion myself. It was included out of habit but I think you're right.

The conclusion was one of the things i notices as well! If you want to sum things up I would suggest putting a basic summary in the intro because at least for wikis i don't believe they have conclusions. If you feel as though you need to sum up ideas at the end I would suggest calling it something else such as Impact or something along those lines. conclusion sounds more like a paper instead of a wiki.

Thanks for the suggestions! I added a sentence to the intro and removed the conclusion - it looks much better.