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Hey, Marissa!

The outline you have looks really good! I'm sure the content will be awesome.

The one thing I will say is to add to your Introduction, just to make it more comprehensive regarding what you'll be covering. Also, I don't know that you need a conclusion, at least not for a wiki.

Good luck!

Rosie Bigelow (talk)18:42, 9 April 2015

Hi Rosie,

Thanks for the suggestions! I do have more to add to the introduction but I usually finish that last. I was wondering about a conclusion myself. It was included out of habit but I think you're right.

MarisaParker (talk)21:09, 9 April 2015

The conclusion was one of the things i notices as well! If you want to sum things up I would suggest putting a basic summary in the intro because at least for wikis i don't believe they have conclusions. If you feel as though you need to sum up ideas at the end I would suggest calling it something else such as Impact or something along those lines. conclusion sounds more like a paper instead of a wiki.

MorganShepherd (talk)21:28, 9 April 2015

Thanks for the suggestions! I added a sentence to the intro and removed the conclusion - it looks much better.

MarisaParker (talk)01:32, 10 April 2015