Sentence edit

Hi Cristen,

I was reading through your wiki and came across a sentence in your "background" section that could be re-arranged. The sentence is:

"Depending on the record itself, the jurisdiction, the type of archives, and the way in which a record is used, copyright law may or may not apply."

I was thinking that perhaps it could be rearranged to say: "Copyright law may or may not apply depending on the record, the jurisdiction, the type of archives, and the way in which a record is used by an individual."

It is pretty much the same, just reworded so that the ending is now at the front of the sentence. Perhaps this flows better?

I agree, it does flow better and it is more obvious that copyright law is the subject of the sentence. Thanks Chelsea.