Language Suggestions

Hi Sarah,

YES, 'Wiki language' is really slowing me down. I know I have work to do writing-style wise and it's helpful to know where I'm at with it so far. Thanks so much for your input, fixing ridiculous sentences is a problem I always have at the draft stage (Wiki-style or otherwise…), and suggested edits like yours are very helpful and appreciated.

Interested to hear you like the first sections. My initial focus was just on different 'places' and the exploring traditional ideas and theory kind as introductory context snuck in at the last minute and I wasn't sure about it. I'll keep beefing them up!