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Hi Victor, I really like how your wiki has come along, especially your use of visuals and video- it really enhances the page. My only suggestion for this week is to maybe shorten the overview as it is quite long and perhaps put rest of the info in the current overview in section 1 or throughout the rest of your page. Again, great page!

KaitlinWood (talk)21:20, 8 April 2015

Thanks for the feedback on the overview Kaitlin because I was just thinking myself that it's a bit on the longer side, but as it is with your writing, every word is like a child, it's hard to move/get rid of them. It's good to know though that other readers are finding it long, I will definitely shorten it and move some of the content elsewhere.

Best,

V

ShengAnVictorLiang (talk)00:07, 9 April 2015