Talk:GRSJ224/canadapointssystem

Hey there! Great post, lots of good information on a topic I frankly did not know about. However I would have liked to see you go more in depth with regards to the discrimination that the points system encourages, i.e see if there have been any studies regarding if this actually occurs.

Hi, I'm really glad you chose this topic as it is an important part of our political dynamics in Canada but many do not talk about it. I think that you could definelty improve upon the piece by looking at flow of the paragraphs. Many of the sentences could be combined to improve the way the paragraphs flow. Overall its good but could definelty use some polishing.