Talk:GRSJ224/Stigmatization of Mental Health in Asian Indian Communities

Hi,

I really like your topic of selection it's very unique and I am really interested to see the way you explore this particular topic. It's off to a good start and I think your introduction is very robust as it gives a general outline of what this wiki is about. Just need to delve and explain more about your examples. Good luck though it's really looking good so far.

Hello,

I really liked this topic and found it interesting. I think you are off to a good start and I really would want to read it again once you finish. My suggestion to you is to add more sections, preferably sub sections to the collectivist ideal part, because I think that is a large section and you can find more about it. Also, I know this is a draft, but I saw some grammer mistakes that you might have missed, so make sure you proofread.

Good luck!

Hi!

I really enjoy the topic you chose for this assignment. The layout is also very well organized and easy to follow. I would suggest expanding on the Collectivistic Cultural Ideal section, mainly because I find it very interesting and I want to know more! Maybe you could go on to further explain some of the examples of cultural ideas that are existent in Asian Indian culture. Also, the last sentence in that section only has 3 sets of quotation marks, but there may be a need for 4!

Great page! Krysten