User talk:JayveeOng

Dear Jayvee,

Your wiki contribution is extremely in depth and you bring a lot of great sources such as economists and examples like the Occupy movement to illustrate your points.

Though I took an economics course on inequality and love to read books about inequality, I definitely learned a bit more through your contribution. Furthermore, I like how well you connect the ideas of neoliberalism and inequality. You make it extremely effective for the reader to connect the dots through a very smooth transition between the different categories you highlight on your wiki page. You provided great context for your points and by setting up the historical significances of certain thinkers and how that impacts the economy/ inequalities, it's very clear and concise.

I'm not sure what I could provide to be constructive, but the graphs are wonderful examples for visual thinkers and I think they add more depth to your wiki contribution as well. I think the only thing I could say is that there are certain areas in the beginning where you could be more concise when introducing what inequality is. But other than that, this was such an interesting and intellectual read!