User talk:CurtisDoucette

Remarks on your essay

Hi Curtis,
Thanks for contributing to the wiki with your essay. Here's some feedback for you.

• Maybe you would like to stick to a theme in your essay. I think you're exploring a lot of ideas here, but nothing in particular.

• A title here or there could be a nice addition, the ==Title== formatting is a very neat way to do this.

Best
-- DavidKohler