User talk:CarmenLockhart

There isn't much material on the page therefore there is not much I can comment on. However I really like the layout of your wiki page. Clearly, it's not finished as not enough material is on the page, but so far I really like the way it's laid out and structured with the introduction, effects, variables and practice sections. I like how it is written not from your own opinion but in a fact based writing style. The sections look to be cohesive and blend well into the following sections of the article, however that is yet to be seen as there isn't much writing at the moment. There could be more pictures or diagrams, but like I already stated, this is still a work in progress. The sources and reference section have great material, but you could include the names of the author and display in a more structured manner. So far, I'm really impressed with the structure, I think the layout of the wiki looks great!

Brian.