Being from the US...
Being from the United States myself, I found your topic very interesting! I think a great thing you could add is about how illegal immigrants and unregistered voters are unable to have their voice heard, as well as people who do not have access to voting areas. This is important because it can skew votes into a certain outcome. Just a small note :) Overall,I think you covered all the basics and if someone were to read your article, they would leave with a good grasp of how the US conducts it's elections!
Briana
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