peer feedback

Hello,

Your topic is really interesting and one that I knew very little about. I'm from a country where people have similar attitudes to sex and what constitutes normative, sexual behavior in young children. I think your headings are informative and the bits about how difficult it is to get STD tests are very relevant. I don't think you addressed contraceptives and their availability explicitly in your article though. That might be a reasonable addition as a separate heading or perhaps under the sexual education heading. You could write a bit more about if the values around sex are changing - are measures being taken to make unwanted pregnancies less frequent. You could also potentially write about how the outcomes for pregnant teenagers from wealthy families who live in large cities and the more urban parts of China differ from the outcomes of poorer, rural girls.

Hope this helps! I look forward to reading the final piece!