Please expand on Consequences
Hi Tinble,
You chose a topic that is not often discussed, yet one that I can relate to as a single Chinese woman. Some of what you wrote I already knew, such as Chinese society's and family's reactions to young girls wanting to date and lack of sex education and sex-related medical services without leaving the country to visit a doctor in HK or Japan. I did not know that "An un-wed birth can become legal if the parents get married within 60 days after the birth of their child." Interesting fact that is probably unique to Chinese law. One change I would recommend for your final version is to expand on your Consequences of teen pregnancy in China section. It needs to be more informative, rather than just a single short statement for each consequence.