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Hi there,

I'm glad your article sheds light on this matter as it is a prevalent issue, but has mostly been kept under the radar. Some suggestions I have would be to watch the flow of your writing as it seems quite essay-like at this point. Perhaps refrain from using "we" or any first person subjects, which are common in more research type papers. This has already been mentioned by others but do complete the rest of your article because I would like to see what the consequences are for the women that face teenage pregnancies in China!