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Nice first draft. I enjoyed reading about your topic.

One comment that I have, which I hope helps in your revisions, is that it is unclear if you have a specific population that you are focusing on. Are you focused on the debate of sterilization in contemporary Canada/USA? - You could include reasons/motives for sterilization (Why would anyone willingly choose such a permanent form of birth control?)

Are you focused on sterilization outside of North America? - Perhaps you could talk about the difference in motives that people have for sterilization in other parts of the world - Perhaps you could discuss the imposition of sterilization (China: One Child Policy) Are you focused on sterilization in the present only, or could you talk about sterilization in the past? - Perhaps you could discuss the involuntary sterilization of the mentally ill/disabled in the past, and the injustice of this situation.

I hope my comments were of use.

Thanks, Eric Mann