Insightful Topic

I think you chose a very interesting topic, and one that we do not hear about quite so often. It really stood out to me that discriminatory and patriarchal nationality laws are a driving cause of statelessness, and that children account for over one third of this. My only suggestion would be to really bring this point home and tie it to intersectionality. For example, how one can be a women or a child and also stateless etc, and what that might mean.