Peer Feedback

Peer Feedback

I think you could have better organization of your topics and the structure of how your examples or case studies are incorporated into the content of the page. For example maybe have a header that says Campus Assault In The News or something along those lines and include the alcohol consumption section in the University Campus Culture section. Create a logical flow in your structure so that it is easy for the reader to pinpoint different categories within the topic and dissect information from your wiki page. Hope this advice helps, good luck!

- Christina

ChristinaFung (talk)00:14, 29 November 2017