Great Topic

Great Topic

I found the topic you chose to be interesting and one I would not of thought of. The topic of "What Does Abstinence Only Sex Education Leave Out?" interested me, however I felt It may need a little more detail. Maybe you could link teenage pregnancy to abstinence only sex education. Try adding some images to your wiki page, it will brake up the wall of text and give it the reader something interesting to look at. Also, double check your spelling, in particular the last line. Over all, the wiki page was very interesting to read, and provided a lot of information.

CierraSkov (talk)22:38, 22 July 2018

I really liked the topic you chose as well! Sex education is so integral for everyone to be safe while practicing safe sex, but also integral for young children to learn about their bodies and how they function. I liked that you linked the reader to the Global news article in reference to how sex education differs in Canada from province to province. I think it might be important to add to that section though because in the past week, the new premier of Ontario, Doug Ford, is following through on one of his campaign promises to revert Ontario's sex education curriculum back to the old one from 1998. This change in curriculum poses real threats and dangers to students as it does not include detailed information about STI's and prevention, contraception, the LGBTQ community... the list goes on. Definitely worth a read.

https://globalnews.ca/news/4330893/doug-ford-ontario-1998-sex-ed-curriculum-teachers/

BeatriceHenshaw (talk)03:35, 23 July 2018