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I am really glad you pursued this topic, as this is still a very relevant and often ignored SJ issue, especially as UBC is very much implicated in this. I would suggest moving the "rape culture" section to the introduction, and then shortly discussing what the rest of your page will cover. There are so many concepts in the page, such as the "Greek system" that reader might not know about, so linking it to Wikipedia pages might be an idea! I like your "what type of men join frats" section, as it explains much of the homogeneity that is present and the cult-likeness of frats. I would suggest making the Turner case study a subsection of section 3, as it would make it easier to read. I like the way you layed out the "how frat men endorse rape culture," and the points you've made. It might be worth expanding the "alcohol" section to consent in general or impairedness, as that pertains more to the section information, rather than solely alcohol (e.g. would drugs be included in this idea of 'working out a yes'?). I'm glad you added the "who does it effect?" section, as an intersectional analysis provides even greater levels of understanding.