Connecting to mmiw and some little formatting nitpicks

Connecting to mmiw and some little formatting nitpicks

This article is real important and I'm glad you wrote it! I appreciate your division of the page into small readable chunks, it made it nice and readable at least for me.

I was wondering if perhaps there was an opportunity here to connect this article to the larger pattern of colonial violence against indigenous women and girls particularly the recent inquiry into missing and murdered indigenous women. I think this inquiry although not specifically youth focused, echoes a lot of what you are saying in a broader scale. Particular the idea of accountability, not just of the police, but of the government and settlers in general for the actions taken by the police.

And I did want to bring up that it would be sweet if you started your headings from the biggest heading (h2) instead of the second biggest (h3). Screen readers software likes if you use headings in a nice sequence and don't jump to smaller ones. It also makes the page look more wiki-like which is an added bonus.

NoahHeyl (talk)04:07, 25 July 2019

Hi Noah,

Yes, much of my points pertain to Indigenous who are not youth, and MMIW is a large part of that. I'll add another section relating this to the pattern of colonial violence in Canada. Also, thanks for bringing my formatting error to my attention- it does look more "wiki-like" now :)

KhadijaAhmed (talk)06:17, 27 July 2019