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Hi! I really like the topic you chose since there's definitely a lot of different directions you can go in. It looks like you will be talking about men being more likely the engage in risky behaviours and less likely to seek medical help, so I think it may be helpful to look into what social factors contribute to this. Is it the societal expectation that men should be able to take more pain and if they seek help they may be seen as weak? I would also love to know if this behaviour is learned from childhood and if it varies by culture? Does the media play a role (i.e. Men's Health Magazine)? I definitely look forward to reading your final draft!