Men and Korean Beauty

Hi!

I found your Wiki page incredibly fascinating and easy to read. There are definitely some great initial pieces that leave room for curiosity as a reader. An aspect I would like to see explored more would be more clearly defined examples of medicalization on male Korean pop stars and the general population's reaction to these expectations. Although you had some parts that said that it was regardless of gender, I think it would be great to see more tangible examples for males as it may be harder to understand by readers who don't have as much exposure to K-pop. You've done a great job with dividing the parts clearly but perhaps having more examples or visuals with each one would help illustrate what some of the ideas that you have already included actually look like. Great job!