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Hello! This is a really great Wiki Page so far. It's interesting to read about the different types of eating disorders in a classified arrangement because I was not previously familiar with some of them. In moving forward with your Wiki Page, I would recommend expanding a bit on each kind of "Casual Relationship." Additionally, with the "Treatment" section you can expand a bit about support groups or hospitalization cases. It could also be interesting to read about the history of eating disorders (when did it start to become a 'big deal') - an article about this is "https://www.psychologytoday.com/blog/evolutionary-psychiatry/201112/history-eating-disorders" And/or, at which points in time have we seen spikes (increases) in eating disorders? Maybe you could add more statistics.

JordynRochwerg (talk)18:40, 9 November 2017

I found your wiki very interesting! Discussing different types of disorders as well as linking societal factors that can impact people and influence them to look a certain way. Your analysis so far seems quite in depth and after doing a little bit of spell-check/editing at the end, your final project will look great!

WillOndrik (talk)06:55, 20 March 2018