Great Topic- some suggestions regarding examples

Great Topic- some suggestions regarding examples

I really enjoy your topic. I agree with a previous comment about how images would support your page tremendously. I also think that the part where you say that masculinity spiked post 9/11 was very interesting- I never actually thought of that! But I think that you could use maybe some comparison examples to back up that statement, like "this was what it was like before" vs "this is what it was like post 9/11" kind of thing. Great job!

EmilyReid1 (talk)22:41, 27 July 2018