Expanding the topic?

I think you did a really great job of beginning an defining the terms surrounding masculinity such as hyper masculinity. To enhance your description, it may be beneficial to add photos of what the typical masculine man looks like?

Also, I really liked the categories and subtitles you chose to include. Perhaps to further add, a different cultural perspective could be valuable to create contrast. (for example masculinity in Asia may look different than North American).

Lastly, although seemingly evident for many GRSJ and SOCI students, maybe adding something about disney movies and how those instil masculine/binary values from young age could be a good little tangent!