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Hey there,

I also really enjoyed this page. I was delighted that you spoke about how challenging it may be for same sex couples or LGBTQ+ couples to adopt. I would have loved in you have dived into the stigma a little more, especially how parenting is stereotyped in society as a feminine thing and essential to women, it would have been great to see more conversation about the different family dynamics and how stigma may affect these families. Also, I have heard of many papers that mention how well adjusted to life most children are when raised with LGBTQ+ parents and that would have been nice support for your paper as to why it is dumb for adoption agencies to make it harder for LGBTQ+ potential parents. To better your paper, there are multiple grammar errors in the last paragraph in particular that would make the essay much more fluid if they were sorted out. Along with some of the reference links not functioning.