Suggestions

Suggestions

Hey! Great job on your wiki page so far! I read through it and noticed a few things that could be edited. Firstly, perhaps format it a little more like a real wiki page, it would defiantly benefit your page to have subtopics divided up ( ie. = = = = subtopic title = = = = ). Another small thing I noticed was in your first line you simply need to say "Contemporary Indigenous challenges are a result of colonialism." Typically wiki pages are straight to the point. Also, final thing, just be careful with your wording, your current page makes colonialism seem like an isolated past event but it is still happening. I would also suggest to discuss a little about stereotyping, it has a huge effect on the way society sees Indigenous populations, and results in the internalizing of these assumptions and it is often put into policy. Other than that great wiki page!! Looking forward to reading your final one.

RachelGoss (talk)02:24, 6 November 2014

Hello, This page is a rich resource of complex and captivating knowledge. I was particularly captivated by the section about the indigenous role in environmental practices. The work by Ending Denial was a great link to have included in this work and I learned a lot about the issues facing environmental challenges. It was very enlightening to gain a better understanding about the basic challenges that are facing this group of people and how these challenges relate to the environment. I would like to make a friendly suggestion, however. I think it is important to highlight the different styles of living among the indigenous from pre colonization to post colonization. There is a significant amount of change that has taken place in that time and I think it is important to highlight those areas. Thank you, Kathy

KatayounRasteh (talk)20:57, 5 December 2014