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Hey, just so you know, if you make your Subheadings into Headings, a table of contents is automatically created for you! I would also recommend making a heading called References right above where your citations are so it looks nicer.

Under the heading Hegemonic Masculinity you have a few mistakes: "masculintiy derives from the patriarchies" should be "masculinity derives from the patriarchy's"

And under the heading Summary: "While North American masculinity has been constructued" should be "constructed"