Suggestions

Suggestions

Teen pregnancy rates have been an increasing issue over the years and you thoroughly covered that in the writing component of your page. Something that would add to your page are pictures, charts, and videos that could help the reader visualize what you are talking about in each of your subtopics. Another suggestion is possibly talking about how pregnancy rates and education differ in different cultures, which can add more depth in your analysis, since culture is one of your main topics. I hope this helps!

CharmaineMagday (talk)01:33, 5 August 2016