Formatting

From a formatting perspective I would really suggest using a different approach for formatting the headings instead of just making the titles big. I think the way other wikipedia pages are laid out in terms of headings being bolded and then having the line across makes it easier to identify the different sections and also breaks it up a little bit so that it's not just all the same text. I think it would make it easier to read and navigate. Also it would help to add images, again to break up the text!