References and expanding on some sections

References and expanding on some sections

Hey! I quite like all the content that you have put on your page so far but was wondering about the citations for the statistics and general information presented. I realize you have references listed at the bottom but I think it is important to link these references to each point in your wiki as well to allow readers to easily find (if needed) where your sources lie for the stated information. As well I think it would be more clear if you were able to include/ add in some hyperlinks for some of the terms you used (i.e. Tiger Mother) to have it more emphasized to the reader. Also, I feel that there could be some expansion in the "influences on children" and "good and bad mothers" section, maybe give some examples of studies showing how children are affected.

AlanaHo (talk)19:18, 5 August 2016