Great topic!

Great topic! I'm very glad you picked this topic, I think it is so relavant to be imformed on this subject especially in light of the current BC electoral reform. As a suggestion, I think adding more peer reveiwed sources would be benefitial to your arguments. Also, maybe adding an infographic or picture would make the page more attractive looking too.

Hi agree with you there I think to add to the topic overall there needs to be a greater sense of credibility which could be added through the addition of academic sources. Additionally I think that you need to watch the tone and direction of your points it is important to try and create a neutral stance when explaining the facets of a system you can talk about benefit but by making forward statements your credibility on the topic can be lost.