Suggested edits: timeline

Hi, I really like what you've written so far. It's reflective of recent events, and I can tell you intend to address the ongoing impacts of the movement. I know it's probably incomplete, but I thought I'd mention a couple things I noted as I read your entry. First, there don't seem to be any dates mentioned? Including dates can inform people who may not be media aware or were not in North America when the movement was at it's height. So mentioning when exactly the scandal with Harvey Weinstein broke, or when Dr. Ford testified against Kavanaugh might be a good addition, if you hadn't already intended to do so. Additionally, mentioning that Dr. Ford's testimony was ultimately unsuccessful in preventing his appointment might be a relevant note. Lastly, do you have any statistics regarding rates of sexual assault (reported or otherwise)?

Good luck continuing the assignment, I look forward to reading more! Vanessa