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Hello,

Great job on your page so far.I liked how you took an intersectional perspective from the very beginning. I also like how you gave introduction and the meaning of migration, but my suggestion to you would be that because of the word limit, focus more on the topic. Also, for your title I think having a more specific one would be better, because this one is just a bit broad ( for example a specific challenge immigrant women face). My suggestion to you would be to be more specific and also have some references for your introduction part if you can.

Goodluck!

MahtabKaramzadehDehaghani (talk)03:27, 26 July 2019