Peer Review

Hi!

I enjoyed reading over your wiki draft. You've clearly done your research on the topic and are passionate about it. My first suggestion would be to add some more visual aids because the text is quite condensed and it would assist the reader in absorbing all your information. Since you are talking about "Women and the Job search" in general, you are working within a very broad topic since while there definitely is a wage gap, this wage gap differs in all parts of the world. I'd suggest focusing on a selected region (North America, developing vs. developed nations, etc. ) because then you could make more effective statements and comparisons. I really like how you use multiple statistics to support your ideas because I feel it gives the reader a better understanding of the size and effect of problems women face in the workplace.