Peer Review

Hi there!

Really interesting topic for you to explore! Good introduction of the topic in the summary, really brought the reader into what you would be delving into and situating the context of it. Especially good about defining what pornography meant in this wiki! I really liked the mentioning of the androcentric nature of porn, and how it is mostly situated around male ejaculation and sexual climax for the male sex partner. I see that you mention "Relationship with online" and "Spanking" a lot throughout the wiki, not sure if that's just supposed to be references. If you want to make reference to a sources several times in the wiki, try following this.

I think the last line in the Objectification section could be elaborated on further. What kinds of objectification are there? Even if its just a one-liner, it's nice to give the reader a concrete image for them to visualize and associate your argument/point with. Digging deeper into the last two sections would also be nice.

Also, I think it would be a really good thing to delve into the feminist discourse surrounding porn (very much entitled the Sex Wars and the Porn Debate). This area of feminism has been written about heavily, and there's tons of literature to dive into for this! Basic run down is there's a debate between anti-sex and pro-sex feminists over whether porn is objectifying or liberating, and the inclusion of this into your wiki would be great. An inclusion of the pornographic actors' voices would be great too (we have to treat porn/sex work as not a stigmatized choice, but perhaps one that is chosen freely and willingly). To add even further intersectionality to this would be the inclusion of queer porn, since sexualized violence in porn is not simply experienced by heterosexual women (or men for that matter).

Overall, really good start and can't wait to see the final draft!