Peer Review

Hi,

Interesting topic but I feel its too broad. It would be nice if you could either narrow down the topic or mention in your introduction what exactly are you planning on covering under objectification and Violence. For instance, when it comes to objectification, women are objectified in movies, advertisements etc and not just pornography. If you plan on focussing how women are objectified in pornography, then it'll be better if you narrow down the topic and go in detail. However, its just a draft but you can definitely keep these pointers in mind when working on your final version.

Goodluck on the assignment!