A suggestion

I agree with Youngmin, I think using specific examples will help demonstrate the severity of this issue. Overall, I really liked the tone of your article and the organization made for an easy read. I also appreciate how you identified police as a major hurdle in the prevention of these crimes. However, I think there are other (maybe lesser) culprits as well. For example, the media does not report on missing cases with the same fervor when the victims are First Nations women. I would also suggest that if you have room, to include a bit on what the current Trudeau government is currently doing to combat this issue. Although we don't know if it's made things better or worst, it is drastically different from the Harper government's approach.