Suggestions

Hello, I think you picked a great topic and put together a great page in discussing it. I especially liked the part where you discussed the effect of colonialism and its affect on the Asian culture. My suggestion is that while you covered the topic in depth, investigating into the socio-cultural influences on the culture, I felt that you did not discuss the benefits of it. I think pointing out the argument on the other side will strengthen your own argument, because that way the wiki page will be more neutral.

Otherwise, I think you did a great job!