Suggestion

Hi Alex,

I really enjoyed reading your article on obesity and how society has been able to take obesity and turn it into a phenomenon for businesses. While you provide a good overview on how obesity is treated and what is considered obese, it would be beneficial for you to show the difference in 'levels of obesity'. For instance, men and women have different thresholds, so you could compare the two and see how one may be more biased than the other. As your are discussing ideal body types, it may be helpful to explain the difference in ideal body types between genders, or even other ethnicities. Adding some more examples and comparisons can help make this article more fruitful.