Peer Review

Peer Review

Hi,

Lovely topic! I am personally driven to read articles and news about #MeToo Movement. What I would suggest is that it'll be nice to start off by sharing briefly what exactly the movement is about. I am saying this because whenever I engage myself in writing papers (for instance) I think of my audience having zero knowledge of my topic. This also makes it easier for my paper to flow. Furthermore, you could also shed light on the current state of assault and how it's dealt in South Korea. Lastly, adding some pictures/videos would make your page more engaging.

Goodluck on your assignment!

MashaalKanji (talk)22:07, 23 March 2018