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Hello, Thanks so much for writing about this topic! I've definitely seen a rise in feminism in South Korea over the past two years, but I had no idea that the #MeToo movement had taken off to this extent. The exact timeline on how the events began to unfold were helpful as well, but a suggestion would be to break it up a little to make it easier to follow. Visuaql aid would be helpful as well! I would love to read over this after your final draft is published, because I'm intrigued by how you will develop your points on the various controversies that surround the movement. It was really interesting to see how there was another side to the movement as opposed to the one that took place in the US and in Canada, which was largely positive and seemingly empowered thousands of women.