Peer Feedback (from Carly Gardner)
I really enjoyed reading your wiki page! I found your clear description of statistical biases particularly helpful. In terms of intersectionality, you might want to include a section that explores which women experience the largest gaps. Is race, sexual orientation etc. an issue for wages? I also caught a couple errors that should be edited:
The last sentence in your introduction: “and to objectively analyze the statistics without personal.” (… personal.. bias?)
Also in Choices of Occupation, second to last sentence: “Women still a minority in natural science…” (Women *are* still..)
Looking forward to reading the final version!
CarlyGardner (talk)