Peer Feedback

I think this is going to be a really intriguing article and I am excited to read the finished piece. I like that you are taking an objective approach to analyzing the facts of the argument, I think so often people get caught up in the politics and the emotions of topics like this, and it is important to analyze this information without that. I also think that your “choices of occupation” and “motherhood and its financial setbacks” are very important issues to address. Might you consider looking into not just the area of occupation, but perhaps full vs. part time? I know that this is something that motherhood often leads to, due to the requirements of childcare. Additionally, I know that a growing trend and something that would be interesting to incorporate is paternity leave for fathers with new children. Overall it looks like you have a great layout and some great points to be made, cant wait to read the final copy!